Georgia Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Georgia Investors

United States > Georgia

In short words, I live in Atlanta, GA. I'm a business man. I'm also an individual investor.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > Georgia

Personal information: Married, located in Atlanta. Education: -B.B.A in Accounting and Finance from the University of Georgia. -Certified Public Accountant (CPA) Certification. -Charted Financial Analyst (CFA). Investment experience: Direct experience in working with and investing in startups & mature businesses ranging from $5MM to $10MM of EBITDA. Anticipated involvement: Hands on and advisory. Status: Individual investor

$10,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Georgia

I've worked in theme parks and telecommunications for 15 years, with leading edge marketing strategy and innovation in highly competitive consumer segments. Willing to be silent investor or partner with advisory role providing council on customer acquisition, go-to-market strategy and customer engagement tactics. MBA degree with focus in Media Management from the S.I. Newhouse School of Public Communication and Whittman School of Management at Syracuse University. Bachelors degree in Sports Management from the University of Massachusetts.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Georgia

Work in the security industry. I am a new investor looking to help someone grow and in return benefit and keep spreading the love.

$10,000 to $30,000

United States > Georgia

30+ year sales professional seeking investment opportunities to broaden my portfolio. Most of my experiences has been in the healthcare industry with a mix marketing, lobbying and direct sales including Sales Leadership. I am creative thinker but more importatntly am able to execute on plans that are created. With that I am looking for an opportunity that is in growth mode and am not looking to play a direct role in day to day activities but if needed can assist.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > Georgia

16 Years of Experience in Entrepreneurship, Business Development, Sales, Operations, and Finance. 10 Years of investment experience in a diversified group of Private investments surrounding Technology, Real Estate, Distribution, Manufacturing, and BioTechnology. Currently: full-time development of the Southeast Region for a tech-startup. I am 38 years old and married living near Atlanta, GA, but have the means to travel to your location for the right investment. Extensive and diverse global network in Sales, Finance, Operations, and Funding. I represent multiple investment groups who are looking to diversify their portfolios with off-market non-traditional investments. Preferred involvement is advisory or silent. Preferred investments have a strong business plan, defined timelines, accountability to results, and an extraordinary commitment to success. I evaluate business proposals daily.

$40,000 to $250,000

United States > Georgia

I'm a single individual looking to invest on innovative, and cool ideas. I would like to invest on start-ups that have the motivation. I've created a couple of successful businesses which have allow me to have additional income available to invest. My involvement with any business would be from the marketing and maybe financial perspective. Trust and communication between partners is essential to me.

$0 to $20,000

United States > Georgia

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$50,000 to $100,000