Georgia Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Georgia Investors

United States > Georgia

I have been in the financial services arena for nearly 20 years. In typical recession time - great companies are born. With the stock market turmoil I would like to consider helping/investing in revolutionary business potentials. I will not consider or waste time reviewing "idea's" - I will consider investments in prototype technology based solutions. I want to see growth opportunity businesses that are scaleable and unique. I want to participate with founder money not be the sole investor in someone's idea. I am direct and fair and very easy to get along with as a shareholder. No matter how good the deal is - if you have to "sell me" - I am not interested. I will either feel it or I won't and I will let you know right away.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Georgia

looking for real deals that make sense for me and my investors. deals that can make money on great returns.

$1,000,000 to $8,000,000,000

United States > Georgia

I'm completely new at this and just wanted to see what kind of opportunities there are for investment. I like the idea of helping someone else while making a small profit in return.

$10 to $20,000

United States > Georgia

Career as an Individual investor, investment group member and licensed broker. 30 years in commercial real estate investments and sales. Involved in Equity and Debt structures, Joint Ventures, and Investment Groups. Can provide Strategies, Capital, and Resources. Experience with deals of many types and in many industries.

$50,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Georgia

I am the president of a mortgage investment firm. We deal with private money and hard money lending. We work within a network of capitalized investors. Our network has 1.5 billion available funds. We fund deals from $50k to $100 millions.

$50,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Georgia

We provide needed capital for project principals with solid business plans and a strong team. It is our desire to work with projects that will positively impact the local economy. Projects and business ventures are given a thorough and realistic evaluation to ascertain their viability for funding. We are interested in retaining an equity position in the project/business ventures we would finance. Our focus is on commercial and residential real estate development projects (including resorts and mixed use developments), restaurants, historic building renovations (castles and such like), private aviation ventures and global village projects. We would also invest in existing businesses that are in distress and in need of capital to grow, including manufacturing, retail and the service industry sectors. Feel free to submit these types of projects for possible funding considerations.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Georgia

I have been self-employed since 2001 and have been profitable since year one. My philosophy on running a good profitable business: Focus, Keep Promises, Treat others how you want to be treated, Customer for life. If you can be focused on your opportunity and willing to work on a well developed plan...then I I'm interested in investing in you.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > Georgia

Individual Investor. 15+ years in IT industry. Looking to build out additional investments. Level of involvement can vary based on investment/industry.

$5,000 to $200,000