Georgia Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Georgia Investors

United States > Georgia

I’m a 47 year old corporate executive that is looking to invest in the next big thing. My background is in Human Resources Management, Procurement Management and Supply Chain Management. I’ve supported multiple industries from local government to fortune 100 management consulting firms leading complex business operations and strategic planning. I am seeking advisory and silent investor opportunities as an individual investor.

$0 to $20,000

United States > Georgia

30+ year sales professional seeking investment opportunities to broaden my portfolio. Most of my experiences has been in the healthcare industry with a mix marketing, lobbying and direct sales including Sales Leadership. I am creative thinker but more importatntly am able to execute on plans that are created. With that I am looking for an opportunity that is in growth mode and am not looking to play a direct role in day to day activities but if needed can assist.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > Georgia

Manufacturing-mechanical engineer by day, entrepreneur/investor every other second.

$0 to $50,000

United States > Georgia

I am interested in a silent partnership. However, I maybe be able to help with the business from time-to-time as a consultant when ideas are needed but the business owner would make the final decision. I do currently invest in real estate and stocks (mostly real estate stocks). I am interested in the education field and the healthcare filed. I have been a teacher, school counselor, real estate agent, tax consultant and I have owned a small business online. I also have a PhD in Education with a focus on distance learning.

$1 to $25,000

United States > Georgia

I am a 30 year old investor living in Old Fourth Ward. I work in the financial industry as a business development consultant. My goal is to become a limited partner in a local Atlanta small business in the food industry.

$5,000 to $30,000

United States > Georgia

looking for real deals that make sense for me and my investors. deals that can make money on great returns.

$1,000,000 to $8,000,000,000

United States > Georgia

Myself and my business partner are looking to diversify our investment portfolio with a few local investments. We have strong software, supply chain, and financial backgrounds. We are happy to offer advice in our areas of expertise but otherwise intend to stay out of the way.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > Georgia

I have been self-employed since 2001 and have been profitable since year one. My philosophy on running a good profitable business: Focus, Keep Promises, Treat others how you want to be treated, Customer for life. If you can be focused on your opportunity and willing to work on a well developed plan...then I I'm interested in investing in you.

$25,000 to $500,000