Georgia Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Georgia Investors

United States > Georgia

Located in metro Atlanta. Very hands on or silent. Have started and run multiple businesses. Looking to invest and become a partner in other ventures.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > Georgia

CEO of a small venture capital firm with sights set on expansion and investment growth through key partnerships and investments. 30 year risk management and commercial insurance broker with risk financing expertise.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > Georgia

Professional Industrial Engineer with over 10 years providing recommendations on investments. Specifically review business concepts, develop strategic plans for successful implementation of start-ups. Determine operating requirements staffing, equipment investments, organizational structure and operating budget. Develop financial metrics, identifiy risks and make recommendations on investments with annual revenues ranging between $100k - $10M.

$25,000 to $75,000

United States > Georgia

I am a 30 year old investor living in Old Fourth Ward. I work in the financial industry as a business development consultant. My goal is to become a limited partner in a local Atlanta small business in the food industry.

$5,000 to $30,000

United States > Georgia

I am part of a group of EMBA students searching for companies to research. We will pick one company and present the chosen company to a Venture Capital firm for potential investment.

$25,000 to $150,000

United States > Georgia

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$200,000 to $99,000,000

United States > Georgia

I have direct buyers looking for investment opportunities.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Georgia

I'm a Disabled/Retired Builder of 25 years in New Construction in Residential and Multi Use. Commercial Build outs. Like to team up with a young go-getter that needs a mentor..I've done over 2 Billion in Construction Projects

$0 to $100,000